This one looks the best of them all. If you want I can write whit the others why they dont work if that would help?

With this one i really like that you have a balanced composition and that you smartly used uneven number, even numbers don't work somehow so good. The black berry is just in the frame so good you looked at that!
The lighting is very good and you can clearly see the textures. I'm still looking on how the lighting was, what did you use to light them?

Now it wouldn't be a good critique whitout saying something that can be improved... hmm.. though one that!
There is some red were the black berry almost touch the frame, just a detail point though nothing disturbing.
mhmm... *sighs* can't find anything wrong..
Just a creative suggestion, have you tried to make them a bit wet so that they look more refreshing?

oh i'm rebeling against DA so aint using the critique box. they are only making things more complicated
They need to redisign the catergories, it just sometimes don't make sence.
Maybe they just need to make a system that you can check what aplies to your art, far simpler.
sorry about the ranting

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Please feel free to critique the others.


Yes one of the raspberries left a little juice on the cutting board.

Lighting is natural - Light was streaming in from my front window so I used it to back light the subject.

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okay will do that tomorrow.
Laying sick in bed now with the laptop.
I've some thoughts about the exposure and some detials but this screen is rubbish so can't and wont judge that.

Interesting, i would say that you had two light sources though... maybe it's my untrained eye XD
you got highlights on the left and also on the right so that's why...
you didn't use a piece of paper to reflect some light back or something?

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I had white poster board underneath and behind which allowed some of the light to reflect.

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Mmm...I like this one the best!!

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It's like they're glowing from within. You always have very good lighting.

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I love raspberries! We used to grow them in Oregon. Hate buying them in the store, as the dark red color means they are about to rot.

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We had raspberries growing in our back yard when I was a kid until my dad pulled them out and planted hostas . I preferred eating them off the plant too.

Hopefully I will be able to get out and pick some berries when I go on vacation for the 4th. The area we are going has a lot of u pick farms but I am not sure what will be in season.

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